Post by Guinevere on Sept 4, 2006 11:43:55 GMT -5
This was not not written by me, but by my friend Tom. I only edited it, so I'll put the unedited version and then the endited by me.
(Story by Tom...)
The Bell Rings A Song
A Naruto Fanfic By
Tom H
Chapter 1: Neji’s Finding.
Naruto threw the shuriken, as Sasuke and Sakura leaped away. It went through Oreo’s heart, and life began to leave him. “This is not the end… I will be back…”
Today was a perfect day, Naruto was 16, and Oreo was defeated, finally, after all of these years. The three began to walk back to the village, with good news. Sasuke stopped suddenly, and felt the back of his neck. “The curse mark, it’s gone. So it really is over.” Sakura stopped, and looked behind him. “Yes… you’re right.” Naruto stopped, and smiled widely at the two of them. “Come on you two, we have to spread the news, I’m sure (Insert name of Hokage here) will be shocked.” Sakura laughed, and nodded. “I’ll bet. Who would have thought that a few Chunin could defeat Oreo!” Sasuke nodded. “I’m sure, that no one would have.” The three ninja nodded, and walked towards the gate. Their long adventure has finally ended, and everyone was happy.
Neji burst through the doors, carrying a blanket with something in it, in his arms. “Lord Hokage! Lord Naruto! I’ve found something.” Naruto was sitting at a large wooden desk, his hair had grown longer, but was still sticking up everywhere. He was wearing the proper attire for the Hokage. “Neji, what’s wrong?” Neji bowed his head, and walked foreward to him, placing the bundle on his desk. “Look inside.” Naruto nodded, and opened the blanket. There was a small child inside, that had to be only one or two days old. “Oh dear… Neji, where did you find this?” “He was in the forest, just outside of town. I was doing a bit of training, and happened to hear him crying.” A door opened slowly, as Hinata came in, carrying a tray of tea. “Hello… Neji.” Neji stared over to her, he hadn’t seen her for a long time, but she had really grown. “Hello, Hinata.” She walked slowly over to the desk, and served the tea to Naruto and Neji, then stared at the baby. “What is this?” Naruto took a sip of his tea. “Neji found this baby in the forest outside of the village.” Hinata picked him up from the blanket, and stared into his eyes. “Naruto, can we adopt this child?” Naruto backed out of his chair… he wasn’t expecting this. “What? You said that you didn’t want children.” Hinata nodded. “Yes, that is true, but, I couldn’t let this one go to an orphanage. He should have a nice life.” Naruto looked down a moment, then looked up to his wife. “Ok Hinata, but I need to stay here in the office, so he’s your responsibility.” She smiled, and kissed Naruto. “Thank you, thank you. I promise he will grow up strong.
Sasuke appeared at the door. He seemed to have gotten faster over the years, but softer at the same time. He walked into the room, and smiled. “Hello Lord Hokage, Naruto.” Naruto nodded. “Hello Sasuke, how is the baby?” “It’s a girl, her name is Rika, and she is doing all right.” “That’s good.”
(Edited Version by me...)
The Bell Rings a Song
A Naruto Fanfic By
Tom H
Chapter 1: Neji’s Finding
Naruto threw the shuriken, as Sasuke and Sakura leaped out of the way. It went through Orochimaru’s heart, and life began to leave him. “This is not the end… I will be back…” were his final words.
Today was a perfect day, Naruto was 16, and Orochimaru was defeated, finally, after all of these years. The three began to walk back to the village, with good news. Sasuke stopped suddenly, and felt the back of his neck. “The curse mark, it’s gone. So it really is over.” Sakura stopped, and looked behind him. “Yes… you’re right!” Naruto stopped, and smiled widely at the two of them. “Come on you two, we have to spread the news, I’m sure Granny Tsunade will be shocked.” Sakura laughed, and nodded. “I’ll bet. Who would have thought that a few Chunin could defeat Orochimaru!” Sasuke nodded. “I’m sure, no one would.” The three ninja nodded, and walked towards the gate. Their long adventure has finally ended, and everyone was happy.
Neji burst through the doors, carrying a blanket with something in it, in his arms. “Lord Hokage! Lord Naruto! I’ve found something.” Naruto was sitting at a large wooden desk, his hair had grown longer, but was still sticking up everywhere. He was wearing the proper attire for the Hokage. “Neji, what’s wrong?” Neji bowed his head, and walked forward to him, placing the bundle on his desk. “Look inside.” Naruto nodded, and opened the blanket. There was a small child inside, that had to be only one or two days old. “Oh dear… Neji, where did you find this?” “He was in the forest, just outside of town. I was doing a bit of training, and happened to hear him crying.” A door opened slowly, as Hinata came in, carrying a tray of tea. “H-hello… Neji.” Neji stared over to her, he hadn’t seen her for a long time, but she had really grown. “Hello, Hinata.” She walked slowly over to the desk, and served the tea to Naruto and Neji, then stared at the baby. “What is this?” Naruto took a sip of his tea. “Neji found this baby in the forest outside of the village.” Hinata picked him up from the blanket, and stared into his eyes. “Naruto-kun, can we adopt this child?” Naruto backed out of his chair… he wasn’t expecting this. “What? You said that you didn’t want children.” Hinata nodded. “Yes, that is true, but, I couldn’t let this one go to an orphanage. He should have a nice life.” Naruto looked down a moment, then looked up to his wife. “Ok Hinata, but I need to stay here in the office, so he’s your responsibility.” She smiled, and kissed Naruto. “Thank you, thank you. I promise he will grow up strong.
Sasuke appeared at the door. The three heads turned to look at him. “Good morning Sasuke.” Said Naruto waving at him. Sasuke had gotten softer over the years, in aging, he’s realized meaning in the world around him. He still never smiled, but he managed a half one. “I’m reporting, lord Hokage-sama, as you had ordered me too.” He says. Naruto’s grin gets wider, much like his younger self. “And?” “It’s a girl, her name is Rika.” Congrats filled the room, the two, well, one former, Hyuugas couldn’t believe their ears. And then Sasuke noticed the small bundle in Hinata’s arms…
More will come later once he gets writing...
(Story by Tom...)
The Bell Rings A Song
A Naruto Fanfic By
Tom H
Chapter 1: Neji’s Finding.
Naruto threw the shuriken, as Sasuke and Sakura leaped away. It went through Oreo’s heart, and life began to leave him. “This is not the end… I will be back…”
Today was a perfect day, Naruto was 16, and Oreo was defeated, finally, after all of these years. The three began to walk back to the village, with good news. Sasuke stopped suddenly, and felt the back of his neck. “The curse mark, it’s gone. So it really is over.” Sakura stopped, and looked behind him. “Yes… you’re right.” Naruto stopped, and smiled widely at the two of them. “Come on you two, we have to spread the news, I’m sure (Insert name of Hokage here) will be shocked.” Sakura laughed, and nodded. “I’ll bet. Who would have thought that a few Chunin could defeat Oreo!” Sasuke nodded. “I’m sure, that no one would have.” The three ninja nodded, and walked towards the gate. Their long adventure has finally ended, and everyone was happy.
*5 years later*
Neji burst through the doors, carrying a blanket with something in it, in his arms. “Lord Hokage! Lord Naruto! I’ve found something.” Naruto was sitting at a large wooden desk, his hair had grown longer, but was still sticking up everywhere. He was wearing the proper attire for the Hokage. “Neji, what’s wrong?” Neji bowed his head, and walked foreward to him, placing the bundle on his desk. “Look inside.” Naruto nodded, and opened the blanket. There was a small child inside, that had to be only one or two days old. “Oh dear… Neji, where did you find this?” “He was in the forest, just outside of town. I was doing a bit of training, and happened to hear him crying.” A door opened slowly, as Hinata came in, carrying a tray of tea. “Hello… Neji.” Neji stared over to her, he hadn’t seen her for a long time, but she had really grown. “Hello, Hinata.” She walked slowly over to the desk, and served the tea to Naruto and Neji, then stared at the baby. “What is this?” Naruto took a sip of his tea. “Neji found this baby in the forest outside of the village.” Hinata picked him up from the blanket, and stared into his eyes. “Naruto, can we adopt this child?” Naruto backed out of his chair… he wasn’t expecting this. “What? You said that you didn’t want children.” Hinata nodded. “Yes, that is true, but, I couldn’t let this one go to an orphanage. He should have a nice life.” Naruto looked down a moment, then looked up to his wife. “Ok Hinata, but I need to stay here in the office, so he’s your responsibility.” She smiled, and kissed Naruto. “Thank you, thank you. I promise he will grow up strong.
Sasuke appeared at the door. He seemed to have gotten faster over the years, but softer at the same time. He walked into the room, and smiled. “Hello Lord Hokage, Naruto.” Naruto nodded. “Hello Sasuke, how is the baby?” “It’s a girl, her name is Rika, and she is doing all right.” “That’s good.”
(Edited Version by me...)
The Bell Rings a Song
A Naruto Fanfic By
Tom H
Chapter 1: Neji’s Finding
Naruto threw the shuriken, as Sasuke and Sakura leaped out of the way. It went through Orochimaru’s heart, and life began to leave him. “This is not the end… I will be back…” were his final words.
Today was a perfect day, Naruto was 16, and Orochimaru was defeated, finally, after all of these years. The three began to walk back to the village, with good news. Sasuke stopped suddenly, and felt the back of his neck. “The curse mark, it’s gone. So it really is over.” Sakura stopped, and looked behind him. “Yes… you’re right!” Naruto stopped, and smiled widely at the two of them. “Come on you two, we have to spread the news, I’m sure Granny Tsunade will be shocked.” Sakura laughed, and nodded. “I’ll bet. Who would have thought that a few Chunin could defeat Orochimaru!” Sasuke nodded. “I’m sure, no one would.” The three ninja nodded, and walked towards the gate. Their long adventure has finally ended, and everyone was happy.
*5 years later*
Neji burst through the doors, carrying a blanket with something in it, in his arms. “Lord Hokage! Lord Naruto! I’ve found something.” Naruto was sitting at a large wooden desk, his hair had grown longer, but was still sticking up everywhere. He was wearing the proper attire for the Hokage. “Neji, what’s wrong?” Neji bowed his head, and walked forward to him, placing the bundle on his desk. “Look inside.” Naruto nodded, and opened the blanket. There was a small child inside, that had to be only one or two days old. “Oh dear… Neji, where did you find this?” “He was in the forest, just outside of town. I was doing a bit of training, and happened to hear him crying.” A door opened slowly, as Hinata came in, carrying a tray of tea. “H-hello… Neji.” Neji stared over to her, he hadn’t seen her for a long time, but she had really grown. “Hello, Hinata.” She walked slowly over to the desk, and served the tea to Naruto and Neji, then stared at the baby. “What is this?” Naruto took a sip of his tea. “Neji found this baby in the forest outside of the village.” Hinata picked him up from the blanket, and stared into his eyes. “Naruto-kun, can we adopt this child?” Naruto backed out of his chair… he wasn’t expecting this. “What? You said that you didn’t want children.” Hinata nodded. “Yes, that is true, but, I couldn’t let this one go to an orphanage. He should have a nice life.” Naruto looked down a moment, then looked up to his wife. “Ok Hinata, but I need to stay here in the office, so he’s your responsibility.” She smiled, and kissed Naruto. “Thank you, thank you. I promise he will grow up strong.
Sasuke appeared at the door. The three heads turned to look at him. “Good morning Sasuke.” Said Naruto waving at him. Sasuke had gotten softer over the years, in aging, he’s realized meaning in the world around him. He still never smiled, but he managed a half one. “I’m reporting, lord Hokage-sama, as you had ordered me too.” He says. Naruto’s grin gets wider, much like his younger self. “And?” “It’s a girl, her name is Rika.” Congrats filled the room, the two, well, one former, Hyuugas couldn’t believe their ears. And then Sasuke noticed the small bundle in Hinata’s arms…
More will come later once he gets writing...